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corey mcdermith

  • Other Poetry Re: My heart is yours

    and when the day fades adn all goes to night, my love for you will shine with all of its might.

    Mar 26, 2008
  • Official Polls Re: Are You Excited About The Journal?

    Definetly somthing i would look forward to.

    Mar 25, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: My heart is yours

    this really was a beautiful piece of work. i think whoever this is for is a very lucky person if you feel this strongly for them. keep up the great ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Master, my Lover.

    incredible job. i am impressed by your ability to write. i am not exactly what one would call a professional, but i know a good book when i see one, ...

    Mar 24, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Purple Lipstick on my Collar (UPDATED 5/15)

    this was quite a story. i have to ask, how long didi it take you to write all of this? i triy t write alot, but i never have teh ...

    Mar 13, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Skies of Mystic Fire - new prologue

    Very good. i found it quite fascinating. I was pulled in almost immediatly adn look forward to the rest of the story.

    Mar 13, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Wall of Light (working title)

    this story was not to bad. a few things i would have changed, but nothing wrth mentioning, so ggod job and keep up the good work

    Mar 13, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Daughter of the Sun and the Son of the Moon

    WOW! this was one of the few stories that have ever made me cry. i like thee mixture of natural events with the feelings of the Supernatural. it was one ...

    Mar 7, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Daughter of the Sun and the Son of the Moon

    WOW! this was one of the few stories that have ever made me cry. i like thee mixture of natural events with the feelings of the Supernatural. it was one ...

    Mar 7, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Why I'm considered a psycho... (Chapter one)

    not bad. i am a little confused as to why she ran away in the first place, but i am sure it will eventually getr to that so keep up ...

    Mar 6, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Epic Quest to a Far Away Land

    what happened?! didi she die? did she just get hit by a car?! AHHHHHHHH! Ya gotta tell me. Please!!

    Mar 6, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Source of Power

    The man stood there, completely at ease. The glare of the lantern overhead made his black hair shine, but his brown eyes were dull as a starless night. Tonight was ...

    Mar 5, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Snake's Eyes

    hey, this was a good interpretation of a well known story. i enjoyed teh way you put all the emotion into it. i also liked the way you kinda made ...

    Mar 5, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Epic Quest to a Far Away Land

    this ws a great story. it kinda reminds me of myself. i am the kind that pushes my mind to do the work, but tehn my body laughs at me. ...

    Mar 5, 2008


Everything in the universe has a rhythm, everything dances.
— Maya Angelou